I applaud you for going out of your element and trying something more challenging but the final product here is just not very appealing. Don't take this personal but the bear looks like a snapchat drawing. The super fat stroke on the type looks bad and the sunburst bg is one of the most overdone...
Cool man I dig this except for the text. Not a fan of the font choice and I'd play with the placement a little. The background looks low quality but other than that solid work.