Not sure on the text at all here man...
It's too focal, and aesthetically it's not the most endearing I've ever seen, but that's my personal opinion.
Bring out the render more and light him up.
There are some awesome things in this, but I think the big face needs to go as well.
Text isn't bad, as is the colouring.
Maybe darken the edges? Could use more focal.
Good stuff though man.
One of the best free kicks you'll ever see. And look at that young Rooney in the Everton wall!
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