Wale

[Delphem]

V1

V2

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

really hate all of the text. other than that its alright. I don't think it requires text at all.

 

[Pugz]

murk the text. would look awesome without it.

 

[Delphem]

Version 2 up minus the text

 

[TTN2810]

I like the text version better. I don't have complaints at all.

 

[.infamous]

I like the text version better. I don't have complaints at all.

This pretty much. I think the text is great for this. No complaints at all really

 

[Delphem]

Thanks a lot fellas. I actually really liked how the text turned out.

 

[jonathanlambert33]

I think you got the idea behind the text right, just somethings missing. Can't put my finger on it...

 

[Falcons11497]

I actually really liked the text version, but like nola said, I think something is a bit off about it. I dont know if I'd just nix the dots, change the size of the dots, or choose a slightly different font.

 

[Gtown81]

I like both versions, both executed well.

Text could use some minor work, but it still works really well with the overall design, nice job.

 

[Hurricane Season]

I liked the text on V1. Not a huge fan of the subtext, but the main text wasn't bad. It just looked a little choppy.