Wale

[dh1333]

My best?

 

[mg91]

Not sure about the box around the text, but this is pretty sick man.

 

[TTN2810]

Lighting is weak. And again, looks foggy. Otherwise one of your best.

 

[dh1333]

Better?

 

[TTN2810]

Yeah it looks a little better.

 

[snipezo]

I see what you're doing with the text but it just doesn't look good with that style at all.

 

[.RuMoR.]

I like it, but I would make the subtext only on that cardboard thing. It goes a little off to the left