tyler the creator

[Donkey]

V1

V2

 

[dh1333]

Text ruins this

 

[Pugz]

text is bad. background could be better too.

 

[Donkey]

v2 up... changed subtext and just made a small lightning adjustment

 

[MJB]

I think the text is alright, just sticks out a tad, it needs to be blended in better, so i can flow with the BG.

I like this.