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[Dubious1]

 

[.truth]

Work on text, some textures on multiply would help this.

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

Not really liking the render in the bg or the text.
Try some different things for those 2 aspects, see how they look.

 

[joshhockey]

I think the render in the BG draws attention away from the render in the foreground too much.