18 calm down he is still learning. Give positive criticism not negative. He could of have said the text is a bad point on this sig or something like that. But yeah text is what is bringing this down. Rest is great.
Your lighting is amazing.
Maybe for text, try a block font in the background, subtext as Silkscreen, then a handwritten font as the main? Throw in some blurring, and other things, and it might look really good.