Stafford

[acarey]

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?mwtgnfzyyyg

 

[Pugz]

make it a little less wide, the background could be better, but it's decent.

 

[TTN2810]

Pretty good, exection could have been better.

 

[acarey]

All i am worrying about now is to get out of this slump. Execution has always been a problem for me but it isn't that bad because i excel in creativity! So thanks for the comments but is there any more specific stuff.

I will add PSD so somebody can collab.

 

[fletch]

i'll try it tommorow.

 

[Oiler35]

Lately, you have been very unique, so there's a +1, but some of the colours really clash against eachother (-1)

 

[jarrod2323]

i would say add depth to the render itself first. needs some kind of effect to make it pop. also, some texture/effects of right will help with the flow.
honestly, the Stafford text color doesn't fit well. it's not a compliment color to the red or blue - white with a blue or black border would maybe work with the contrast

 

[acarey]

Yea my background was initially green so that is why the text colour is so different. I changed it last minute so i didn't bother with the text. I will try some stuff!

 

[Oiler35]

Any better?

 

[JUNX]

v2 is better. too much over the render.

 

[brannan]

i like V2. the shapes in both are cool imo.