Rondo

[soty]

Made this with GIMP. Thoughts?

 

[trewd]

I don't like the purple on the left

 

[alozz]

text is cool .

 

[Leggster]

Not too keen on this one mate.
I don't like the render effects here
The colouring could be better and i don't like the multiple render idea.

Keep going mate!

 

[.loggie]

Not a terrible style but the execution isn't there. The text area is too crowded and unreadable, the stocks make it look LQ, and I'm not feeling the purple on the left. Keep posting your stuff though and listening to CnC and you should improve in no time.

 

[soty]

Thanks guys I will keep working at it.

 

[dh1333]

Yeah work on coloring. Try to make it look HQ.

 

[xDesjardinsX]

i dont like sorry. Effect is bad and color equally. Purple ?

 

[alozz]

too shiny ...

 

[Brunet]

why purple ?? i don't like the purple on your sign..

 

[.rDK']

First of all the purple and the second render should be remove imo then try smoothing background rest is good though text is fine but a bit lq imo.