Ray Emery

[STLZACH]

I was 90% sure I posted this last night. But oh well.

its my first cut, be gentle.
skate is cut off cuz thats how the pic was.

 

[STLZACH]

I was 90% sure I posted this last night. But oh well.

oh i did <_<
http://www.sportzin.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=51758

can a mod help me out here?

 

[jarrod2323]

when asking for criticism, those threads are moved to the Render Gallery area.

we've been trying to keep only gallery-worthy cuts in the Submission Thread for now


now - as for criticism

You need to TRIM this badly -- way too much excess blank area
another suggestion would to be attempt larger pics, as the smaller ones are a tad more difficult to get right
also, the pic quality is somewhat poor -- grainy
as for the cut itself, practice smoothing out edges -- same thing I tell CG - there's hardly any hard/pointy edges on a cut
another trick is the Matting>Defringe to help alleviate thin lines of bg around the entire cut

 

[STLZACH]

when asking for criticism, those threads are moved to the Render Gallery area.

we've been trying to keep only gallery-worthy cuts in the Submission Thread for now


now - as for criticism

You need to TRIM this badly -- way too much excess blank area
another suggestion would to be attempt larger pics, as the smaller ones are a tad more difficult to get right
also, the pic quality is somewhat poor -- grainy
as for the cut itself, practice smoothing out edges -- same thing I tell CG - there's hardly any hard/pointy edges on a cut
another trick is the Matting>Defringe to help alleviate thin lines of bg around the entire cut

oh ok.
thanks for the crits, ill try those out.

 

[STLZACH]

btw, where does everyone get their pics from?

 

[fletch]

usually elibrary, yahoo.

 

[Donkey]

bump for fix

 

[jarrod2323]

not added due to lack of fix