Text 5/10
BG 3/10
Render Position 4/10
Coloring 6/10
Blending 5/10
To sum this up you need brighter coloring and less of this dull stuff, not more putting the render in the middle, and kind of blend it better, personally i think this might be one of your worst because I have seen some others that have been very nice looking. Plus maybe have the text stick out more and possibly blend it some more.