Monsieur Eric

[mg91]

Thoughts?

 

[mg91]

Topic moved to the right area.

So, any comments?

 

[snipezo]

I like this. I think text could use some work but it's pretty good.

 

[.infamous]

Effects look sick but the text brings this down. Overall pretty good sig. Post a new version up with new text.

 

[mg91]

Tried some different text as requested.

 

[Dorado]

put it closer to his face

 

[jordan888]

sick lighting, sick effects. text? not so much. both versions have weak(ish) text, i like the v1 text more though. just not the sizing of it, because its too hard to read, and also, not close enough to the face.
always try keeping text close to the focal