This is tight my dude, you should be. The concept and composition are great. I know you love the over sharpened look but it's holding this piece back. Only other complaint is there's no spotlight on the helicopter. It looks like a big beam of light is just coming from the bottom of it. Those are pretty minor things though this shit is still great if you fixed those it would be perfick.
Preciate it, man. Turns out the guy I made it for didn't like it at all haha, but I think I'm gonna keep playing with it (add a spotlight on the ghetto bird) and keep it for a potential portfolio piece if I decide to pursue design any further.