Matt Ryan

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Tell me what you think, and what I should improve on. I want this piece to be really good

V1: http://www1.picturepush.com/photo/a/4702839/img/Picture-Box/matty-ice.png

V2:
 

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its not bad at all, but id say just about everything needs work, learn some blending techniques, text looks cheezy, render effects/adjustments layers made parts choppy, and coloring. Just keep at it and keep learning new shyt
 

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theres no tree's in outer space.... lol. bot feelin the text or coloring.
 

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theres no tree's in outer space.... lol. bot feelin the text or coloring.
the BG is a stock lol

any suggestions on how to fix the coloring? and which font to use for it?
 

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if you want my honest opinion, i think it's terrible.
thanks (no sarcasm)

how should i improve it? u like V1 better? improve on that one?


im doin this for a little contest for school, and i plan on kicking his ass lol (he is god awful)
 

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how should i fix the coloring?

plus is the snow a yes or a no?
 

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Considering the bg is just a stock, this is pretty much awful.

Coloring, blending, text, shadow, lighting, render effects.... all need a shiit load of work.
 

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