Manram.

[fletch]

completely messing around, not big on it at all.

 

[fletch]

btw i know text is <Censored>.

 

[Pugz]

the bottom stock work does not flow at all.

 

[TTN2810]

the colors dont flow, but this is pretty nice

 

[Donkey]

make it black and white imo

it will fix it up and make the colors match lol

 

[fletch]

v2 edited.

 

[jarrod2323]

I like the first one, but I would bring text above the stock

 

[snipezo]

Making it B&W is like cheating so you don't have to put colors on it imo. But this is nice I like v1

 

[Donkey]

v2 better imo

 

[acarey]

Hey i love V1.. the only things are the messieness of the hexagonal pattern. I think with a sharper cut-off it would add more to this than blending them in. Preferably on the left side! also the white soft light should be toned down.

the text is actually really good in V1 and then it turns really generic in v2. This is really solid

KIU!

 

[The Guid]

if you fiddled with brightness and contrast on v2 I think it'd be A LOT better, it's not bad tho

 

[The Guid]

for example:

 

[Mexi]

manny sucks

it's too messy

 

[.truth]

V1 is hottttttt.

Manram sucks a cock though.

 

[josueelcatracho]

This is real nice man I'm feeling this. But go out of the comfort zone and try something new just my 2 cents. I wanna see something diff from u.