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[.RuMoR.]

I took a risk on the text, I think it came out okay

 

[playmaker7]

More development and this would be dope man

 

[snipezo]

Your best but still not finished. Post up the PSD. I might collab.

 

[Dorado]

your best! like everyone said, finish it and its DOPE

 

[mg91]

Agreed with above.

Lots of potential man.

 

[dh1333]

Don't see how this is you're best. I don't like the stock/c4d thing over the render and the text needs to be reworked looks slapped on. The render is nicely incorporated into this signature though.

Overall add more to the background, its too empty. Take off that C4D, rework the text. Good start though, Just needs more.

 

[mr7]

Love this. Beautiful text, and the c4d is perfect. It could use a bit more work on the render, but it's a great start.