Lesean McCoy

[Orange]

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

I don't like any of it tbh..Just something about it I guess.

 

[Donkey]

you know tbh there is really nothing good about this

first of all the text is way over shapened and looks distorted and i can't even read the sub text

next you put a stock over the render's face and it covers half of it so now thats not your focal really... my eyes are dragged toward the text or the big render

the random red looks terrible

last but not least you cant be erasing an arm like that to make it see through

those are just the MAJOR nono's

 

[Orange]

Lol thanks for the advice. I was just kinda trying to play around with stuff on this, still tryna get better. I will take some of the stuff you guys said to mind. I agree that this <Censored> is a <Censored>in mess...

 

[.truth]

Too messy bro.

 

[.truth]

Too messy bro.

 

[.loggie]

It's your best but could still use a few improvements. The text is too choppy and my eye is drawn to the render on the left instead of the smaller render.