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This is sweet. Really wouldn't change anything
 

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really well done
 

youngguru

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too much contrast
 
and fade the shadows to make it look a bit more realistic 
 
text/layout/idea is dope
 

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guru said:
too much contrast
 
and fade the shadows to make it look a bit more realistic 
 
text/layout/idea is dope
Thanks. I always have trouble with overdoing it. I'll def keep that in mind.
 

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Good job, GSM. Def the best piece I've seen from you. I agree with the comments that it's over-contrasted. Also the shadows (buildings and players) are very off and can use a lot of work. Darkening the edges isn't a bad idea but it's really abrupt and doesn't match with the rest of the piece. 
 
Also your logo is huge lol. I know you want to protect your work but honestly it's distracting and takes away from the work here. I'd make it about 50% of that size, put it in the bottom right, and give it about 30px from the right and bottom edges. That's just my opinion, though.
 
Nice work overall. If I was a Seattle fan I'd rock this.
 

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I appreciate the constructive criticism AS. I'll definitely keep that in mind going forward.
 

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The watermark is too big for this. On small definition render efx looks great but on high definition, render looks LQ
 

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