I really like the render effects on this for some reason lol, text placement could be a bit better, and get rid of those stroked lines behind the text or throw a motion blur on them, lookin good though
The Render takes away from the smooth BG and great lighting you have
a top. The Dashes are also not well blended. The render EFX's are over done
but it's nice. A Gmap would have helped you out a lot on the right side.
Text also seems clustered. Overall this is nice man. I dig this. BG is smooth..