Jose Bautista

[Mr.Baller]

collab with gtown

 

[Mexi]

whole thing looks to sharp
render should be in the middle

i actually think the text is ok lol. maybe im the only one
but this would definitely look better with the render centered

and i like everything else that you've done. effects, lighting, BG. good job

 

[Mr.Baller]

thx for the comments bro , i'm going to center him and minus the sharpness !

 

[vcu4lifegoviks]

I really like the position of the render. A basic rule of composition is the focal point should never be smack dab in the middle.

 

[Asian Mamba Attack]

I don't know why but this signature reminds me of the old times if you know what I'm talking about. I personally like this, but yeah I agree with what most of the guys said.

 

[Pugz]

i think this is your best work.

 

[Teagz]

I have no idea why but I love that render lol

 

[Mr.Baller]

Wow thanks guys !

 

[Gtown81]

don't have the text overlapping the render, the fact that part of his arm is a dark colour and the other part is a light colour, it will be hard to place a well sized font with a solid colour, if I were you I'd just delete the duped text, leave the other text the way it is, put it on overlay or soft light and move it over to the right of bautista

if you wouldn't mind, you can throw the psd my way and I can show you what I'm talking about, this has a lot of potential, I've got some good ideas

 

[jonathanlambert33]

I know the text sucks , but could someone tell me what to do with it ...

I'd say move the text to the right, and choose a different font.

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

I'd say take the text out entirely, and just add s'more into the foreground.

 

[Gtown81]

 

[Mexi]

great job with the text GTown

 

[Mr.Baller]

That's dope man ! great collab

 

[snipezo]

yo can i wear?

 

[Mr.Baller]

sure bro