Sorry dude, but I don't like this one. The stocks don't fit just like picasso said. The colouring could be much better. The font choice could have been better. Also try putting a light source near the top and see how it looks.
Yeah I'm not big on this one bud. The textures on his face don't look great and the pale colouring isn't the best. Shake it up a bit dude. Text also needs work.