Help please

[Edgar]

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I know this needs some serious work so any advice on what to add remove or change is greatly appreciated.
btw I know the text isnt good, and that is an area I need to work on so any ideas on that would be really appreciated too

 

[Edgar]

V3 is now up, and feel free to jump in with some advice cause I would really appreciate it

 

[jarrod2323]

v3 is by far the best technically.

try using duplicate renders faded/brushed in the bg for depth -- it also helps blend in the white into the different colors of the BG

 

[fletch]

do a color balance, and some exposure layers to blend better.

 

[Edgar]

Any advice with the text cause I know that's always a hot-button issue