Hedo

[Mr.Baller]

 

[Dorado]

text still looks uber bad
its not really about what font you use its how you use it

 

[playmaker7]

^truth.com

Its a start. But you gotta use it effectively man

 

[Rios15]

I can't tell which render is the focal, fix that.

 

[mg91]

Text still isn't great but it's at least a bit better.

Also fix the focal problem that has been mentioned.

 

[jordan888]

Blur the bg render, work on the text and t his is nice