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[Pugz]

collab with nbaballa. i started, he added, i slightly finished.


i dig it. good working with ya, again.

 

[The Guid]

Classic grungy look. Colors are nice as is blending. I dig. If you want me to nitpick, it might be a bit too sharp or grainy (don't know which effect it is) in certain areas.

 

[nba_balla]

haha love it man gotta do another one soon ill start it up

 

[Pugz]

bempo

 

[Mr.Baller]

Great work man ... this is dope and reminds me of the old school sigs I used to see on SI before

 

[lochness]

not bad, too sharp though

 

[jarrod2323]

yes - my first critique in probably a year.

work on contrast -- darks are well represented, but you lack true whites to counter the darks. The grunge darks almost hide the render, as well as the text. They should accent it, not hide.

Great flow and work with shapes and designs, but find a true focal point and work on the contrast (lighting - if that makes more sense)

 

[Pugz]

i tried messing with the contrast levels at the end but with so many other color layers it didnt adjust right. i do agree.

and i purposely did the sharpness high and the grain, but again, i agree with what has been said.

thanks guys.

balla, looking forward to more.

 

[nba_balla]

yes - my first critique in probably a year.

work on contrast -- darks are well represented, but you lack true whites to counter the darks. The grunge darks almost hide the render, as well as the text. They should accent it, not hide.

Great flow and work with shapes and designs, but find a true focal point and work on the contrast (lighting - if that makes more sense)

HEY JARROD