dan the ham

[jordan888]

 

[Dorado]

coloring is bad

text needs work...

 

[mg91]

Mate, the text is pretty much the same again here...

I do like the lighting, but I'm not sure if the colouring blends here...

Not bad, but you've done much better.

 

[.infamous]

Your getting better jordan. Just the text needs to be changed and be more visible. Also the coloring like everyone else said.

 

[Dorado]

oh yeah im also not so sure about the bubbles pretty random if you ask me

 

[jordan888]

im completely stumped with text. ive got nothing imaginative at all. anyone care to help?

 

[dh1333]

Coloring looks really bad sorry. The text needs some work, but i like the bubbles.

 

[fletch]

try simple text, like arial, times, etc.

 

[TTN2810]

If you desaturated the render it would look way better. Also maybe make the text more readable. Very nice though. I like it.