It may be my laptop screen, but it seems a tad dark. Not a fan of the font either, but this has crazy potential my man. I may try a collab if I have time in the next few days.
Honestly, I freakin loved how you did this Pugz. I didnt like the text so much, but the subtle lighting, to me, was just right, made it look really intimate and made the render pop just enough. I love it. nice work.