CnC

[Edgar]

CnC

 

[STLZACH]

I cant even tell what that says

 

[mg91]

Too dark.

Not enough focal.

Text is too hard to read.

Keep at it though mate. Just bring out the render and text a bit more next time and add some lighting. If you do that you'll have a good base to work from.

 

[Edgar]

I've made a V2 that Ive tried to make a bit brighter around the head and the text easier to read