Charity Book Cover

[andy]

This is for my charity Bicycles for Humanity, my sister wrote a children's book for a project in her major with elementary education. Now my dad wants me to revamp it and illustrate it then we can use it as a fundraiser. Here's the cover design

http://sweetness34.deviantart.com/art/Bicycles-for-Humanity-Book-190794045

comments por favor

 

[fletch]

Background stock looks bad imo, i'd switch to a color based background or different picture.

 

[buzzy]

I'd decrease the spacing between the words of the "Two wheels at a time" text.

 

[tugg]

you live in africa?

 

[andy]

Background stock looks bad imo, i'd switch to a color based background or different picture.

It's not a stock, it's one of the pics my dad took while we were down there all the pics in the book were taken by my dad or me. If it wasn't a childrens book I think the just color based background would work. I'll take a look to see if I have any other pics that'll work and give it a shot

I'd decrease the spacing between the words of the "Two wheels at a time" text.

I see what you're sayin, thanks

you live in africa?

ha nah man, My dad and I went to Namibia for a month this last summer. We were doing charity work for our organization Bicycles for Humanity.

 

[playmaker7]

It doesn't blend well IMO...maybe its just the background

 

[deven]

i don't like the typography. but the overall design is good.

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

I love this. And I love the charity you guys have created as well, really. Big probs on that dude, and your whole family that works on it together.

 

[andy]

I love this. And I love the charity you guys have created as well, really. Big probs on that dude, and your whole family that works on it together.

appreciate it man

and thanks for the feedback guys