Broadway Mark

[HTF]

V1:

V2:

V3:

CnC Please.

 

[Oiler35]

Try working on a smaller canvas, move the "MARK" text to the right side of the "SANCHEZ" text, and blur one of the renders.

Not bad.

 

[fletch]

make the width smaller, blur the render, just what was said above.

 

[HTF]

V2 added, thanks for the tips.

 

[Oiler35]

More to the right.

It'll be real nice when the K meets the Z.

 

[Pugz]

fix it like SG said again, and maybe add more to the BG?

 

[josueelcatracho]

fix it like SG said again, and maybe add more to the BG?

+1

 

[A.E]

I think adding more to the background would take away from the elegance of the sig. I like the simple-white background as it is...but there is a lot of empty space going on there.

My solution is to make the sig smaller by taking out some of Mark's body below the neck or move the render up. Text also doesn't work for me. Good text effects, wrong font choice.

 

[Giantmetfan07]

I like the way it is, I say just move the Mark over so the K is on top of the Z.

I like AEs thinking, to take a bit off the bottom. Are you thinking like have the text on the bottom rather than a few points up? I think that would look better too.

I say stick with the font, move the Mark a bit more to the right so the K lines up with the Z, maybe blur the Mark to the right a bit more, and take some off the bottom. I think if you do that it'll come out perfect.

 

[HTF]

V3 added.

I agree that the text choice could be better but I don't think it's too bad. Thanks for all the feedback, it's much appreciated.