Berzerk

[hat-94]

Shirt Design​

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[buzzy]

Try without the stroke?
 
Nice work

 

[hat-94]

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black line is becuase of screen shot.​

 

[buzzy]

Word. Looks good

 

[pistonsboi]

this is tiight, i would find a better/more creative font for "berzerk"

 

[Pugz]

this is tiight, i would find a better/more creative font for "berzerk"

 

[hat-94]

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ya'll like the color?​

 

[Pugz]

much better

 

[ambivalentSoul]

This illustration is def better than your Kanye one, but the colors are really bad. Very bland and dull. 
Also the stroke wasn't necessarily bad, it was just the color that made it ugly. If you make it the same color as your shadow tones it would probably look good.