Looks good mate, maybe throw in a small render?
Text needs to be redone. http://jvfpicasso.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2diki9 try something like that.
Just an idea. You have improved a lot tho good job.
This has serious potential. Coloring is not worikng here. If you would have you the desert's natural colors
with vick in it it would have been nice. Also, too many renders man. Also, organize your focals my eyes are bouncing
from one place to another. Potential is there but needs auto tunning...
No prob my dude. Btw, im going to get ask on how i did the render efx's!
It's just blurring and smudging. Just keep trying new tech's took me a while to get it.