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way better than the other one (the red and black one)

but still, idk man, no clear focal here, my eye jumps around randomly
 

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no hate, just saying he could make the focal more defined, and yeah def. text issues


and yeah jvello, iEph made that
 

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I like this. Not the texture, but the rest I dig.
 

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Thank you Trace, TTN and Rockstar for the CnC.
 

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This is nice bro ! Like the other guys said ! Work on the text
 

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Yeah the text is awful. Rest isn't too bad, good job. Keep it up
 

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Wow, Thanks all. I love hearing that from you guru. You made probably my fave piece ever with the Mac miller wall.
 

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yea man, im diggin this. could use some lighting adjustments to get a better focal but you did good here. keep it up
 

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yeah main text is eh

also, the back render is a little LQ

other than that, its nice
 

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Yeah, focal could definitely be better but it's still attractive.
 

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yeah main text is eh

also, the back render is a little LQ

other than that, its nice
I made it LQ looking. Making it HQ looking would make the render even more hard to pop out.

How do you do your sick render effects teach me :)
 

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Worse text but tried bring out the render more.

Also lol at who bombed me with neg rep.
 

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honestly V1 is better in all aspects

idk how ur doing it but the render doesnt pop more at all, try some lighting or lighting stocks instead, also yeah the text is the wrong color and wrong placement and prolly wrong font so....
 

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