you make text seem like it's th hardest thing ever lol.
so out side of the text the only thing I don't like is the white lines over him.
not bad, but text is a major kill for this.
see how your render is looking upward? moving the text/bg in that angle will give it better flow IMO.
right now, everything is moving from upper left to lower right, and the text is stuck in no-man's land. font choice is fine, just placement could use some work IMO