Sheldon & Buffy Are The Reason The Twilight Series Died

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Link - http://playmaker7.deviantart.com/art/Buffy-Says-quot-DIE-TWILIGHT-quot-158745175


My first collage and the first thing I've made in a month. Trying to get back into it
 

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Looks really good but the BuffylovesSheldon text has GOT to GO!

BTW, I wouldn't know how to start one of these things if my life depended on it haha.
 

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Looks really good but the BuffylovesSheldon text has GOT to GO!

BTW, I wouldn't know how to start one of these things if my life depended on it haha.
Dude...the only reason this even has Buffy in it is because the last thing I copied before I went in PS was a Buffy pic from the SND last night lol

It was an accident...and I went with it. I was just gonna make a random wall and thats what I got lol

I love it actually. It was really difficult though. And yeah, starting it is the hardest part. I actually started a piece yesterday then my computer froze so this is my restart lol

I might tinker with more collages

 

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Can I get some more criticism on this please? I'm trying to see if I should try something like this again
 

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Actually maybe a dark background might look good on this instead of white.
 

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I really like this. Very creative.
 

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Updating first post with link

http://playmaker7.deviantart.com/art/Buffy-Says-quot-DIE-TWILIGHT-quot-158745175
 

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Wow, lot's happening here.

It's good man, very creative, and I think you should certainly keep doing these.

Areas you can improve however would be text and the focal. I'm not really sure where to start to look here. The love hearts help, but I think you can do a bit better than that. I'm a big fan of using the burn and dodge tools. Blurring is also effective, but that wouldn't work here imo.

Also, it looks a bit flat, I would try and add more depth to it.

But good job mate. Hope the comments are helpful for the next one as well :)
 

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Thanks man I really appreciate the C&C

I'll probably try another one soon
 

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