Schoolboy Q

[Bengals1Fan]

First in a while. thoughts?

 

[MC2]

The blue is kinda strong and could use a little more contrast and the s in schoolboy is barely visible. He's an awesome rapper though, love his stuff, and all of Black Hippy.

 

[pistonsboi]

u always sucked brah, its like u dont take critique into consideration towards your next piece of work
 
take it how u take it

 

[Bengals1Fan]

u always sucked brah, its like u dont take critique into consideration towards your next piece of work
 
take it how u take it

Hey brah, I'd appreciate some critique now, and if you saw my welcome back post, you'd see that I'm trying to grow up and be more mature. If there's no critique, how am I supposed to use it?

 

[bosoxlover12]

too monochromatic and not enough going on

 

[Bengals1Fan]

too monochromatic and not enough going on

Thanks man, I'll work on it

 

[Pugz]

you could keep it blue but add more depth and expand the coloring a bit