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[dcpwner]

first sig in a long ass time

 

[Mexi]

looks unbalanced
left side needs a little grey like the right side
i think if you took a copy of the finished product and moved it far right so the very end of the right side goes to the left, it'll look nice

good solid sig though

 

[Falcons11497]

I would probably blur the left side of the sig (and/or darken it) as it kind of distracts a bit from the focal. I'd also rework the text.

 

[bosoxlover12]

The N in scalabrine is jagged

 

[Pugz]

mmaybe add a clip mask of the sig to part of the text?