Poor text choice man, it needs to be brought down lower to the render, as well. The background stock needs some work overall, it isn't executed right. Keep working man.
Ugly and dirty which makes for a terrible sig. Needs something to make it flow and that render is definitely not suited for a dirty sig of any sort IMO. Everything needs work
The bg and text are horrible, which in essence makes the whole thing bad. Go for a cleaner bg. Clean doesn't mean it has to be bright. You can still go for the dark effect but here it just looks waaaay too rustic. Work on text too man.