Melo

[Mr.Baller]

 

[mg91]

Text dude. I like everything but the text.

 

[Mr.Baller]

Okay i wanted to do something with this font but it didn't work well lol
but your right !

 

[TTN2810]

I agree with mg. Nice job dude.

 

[Mr.Baller]

thx man !

 

[Mr.Baller]

Others comments ?

 

[soty]

I really like it except for the text. That big Melo just sticks out like a sore thumb. If I was you I would put it closer to the bottom and much smaller. Maybe make it straight instead of tilted the way it is too. The lighting, stocks are good just the text that needs to work. Nice job man.

 

[trewd]

I agree about the text. Maybe put some texture over it so it blends with the rest of it.