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[dh1333]

 

[.RuMoR.]

That's a 410x194 beastma

 

[Rice18]

Take out the way back text. Pretty nice though. Even though you are using the same style over and over.

 

[Mr.Baller]

too much text for me and the double render doesnt look good here ..

 

[.Dingler]

I agree with Rice, I feel like i keep on seeing this from you again and again. Im not saying its bad though, Good work.