the one circle/light spot from the picture over his shoulder/O text is so overly contrasted is really distracting and a killer for the sig for me. its a pretty simple piece but the coloring and lighting makes it really cool overall. i like it. you need to try and add more to your work though and try to develop a style thats more your own.
Thanks fellas and I hear ya Pugz I know... I need more depth also. Also fellas what circle do u mean? Those are lights that were in the original pic I could post it if u like.