Macadelic

[Delphem]

Yes I know it is bright...I wanted it like that...

V1.

V2.

 

[jonathanlambert33]

The text by his arm...

 

[Maestro]

I really like this. I know its bright but that is the look you were going for. And I think the text by his arm is supposed to be the subtext...

 

[Delphem]

Yea Macadelic is the subtext

 

[jonathanlambert33]

I say drop it, doesn't look good and looks out of place.

 

[Pugz]

kill the subtext or just put it under the main text. solid work.

 

[Maestro]

I think it works with the flow, but it does "look" out of place because there is nothing above it besides a C.

 

[josueelcatracho]

I'm on my phone. But this looks good bro.
Kill all the subtext. Add some more lighting
over the top. Darken the bottom and to the right
Over the render. And kill the stuffshe behind the render
as well.

 

[Mexi]

dont like the subtext
everything else is really good

 

[Delphem]

V2 up....