ludacris

[rk17]

comments?

 

[Hurricane Season]

Too washed out. The text is definitely not working either.

I'd also attempt to get a little more creative with the background.

 

[spangar]

to washed out

 

[SaintFan25]

Too washed out and rework the bg.

 

[rk17]

V2

I'll work with the background a little more, not sure what to do with it yet.

 

[Swish]

V2 is 10 x better

 

[dcpwner]

still washed out with a very vague focal