Kobe

[Rios15]

 

[mg91]

Don't like the paleness of the colours. The whole thing looks sort of LQ and the lighting is off.

Keep at it.

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

Try to choose between cleanliness or grungy. It looks as if you have grunge and clean stocks in it. For this one, I think it'd look better clean though. So lose that crack stock IMO. I don't mind the text here actually though.
Keep truckin bro, you're going to break through soon, I'm feelin it.

 

[.loggie]

pretty much everything gety pointed out as well as making the colours flow. i don't like how the sig is a pale red colour while the lighting is yellow. keep at it man. you can see that the potential is there, you just need to execute a little better.