this was is different from your normal work wich is real good. the super strong lighting on the text is not though. that always seems to be your problems man. i would really try to stray away from super powering exposures/adjustment layers
The lighting is way too strong here. Makes everything look low quality. I would make the text smaller and move it closer to the render to create a focal point as well.
I have come to expect your work to have contrast or sharpness in it. I dont like the overall set up of this. I think the text is the focal and not the render. The render just doesnt seem blended well. Not one of my faves from you, but with some tweaks, this could work on different levels.