Jose Calderon

[snipezo]

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I think this is one of my best.

 

[Oiler35]

The text and strokes really don't fit in.
I suggest blending in them better, or changing the colours.

 

[snipezo]

but overall do you think it's good?

 

[Pugz]

it's not bad, but I'd lose the storke and blend the text better.

 

[.truth]

Erase some of the stuff over his forehead so it's not red.

 

[Nucker]

Clear the red stuff off his face.

 

[LinebackerU_31]

yeah i dont like the strokes