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[bosoxlover12]

http://www.mediafire.com/?k89uow0m26xjg27

 

[.infamous]

ahh man bosox u were so damn close to have a nice ass sig but text is what stops that. If the text was just even a bit better this shit would be fire. Definitely your best

 

[bosoxlover12]

I literally have no idea what to do with text haha

 

[bosoxlover12]

V2?

 

[Falcons11497]

damn dude, this coulda been sick as hell
V2 is better but the text still needs work
I like the box on the right too but the dots in the box don't really belong (too big)
Subtext on v2 and dots below it look bad, and the font choice/placement kinda kills this
But damn man, you're getting a lot better

 

[bosoxlover12]

made a v3 to humor picasso. will look at what u said devon once I post this

 

[Pugz]

v3 but the effects are a tad over done. still nice work

 

[bosoxlover12]

Changed the text up, like it more than the previous font

 

[Pugz]

nah

 

[bosoxlover12]

You don't like the text?

 

[Pugz]

nah

 

[bosoxlover12]

what type of font should I go with? or is the Helevetica good?

 

[Pugz]

i like the text from v3.

 

[bosoxlover12]

Aight then lol


thanks to erryone whos tryna help me out, I really appreciate it

 

[Pugz]

you also needa work on render effects. i dont even really do much to my renders. just some lighting layers and then work on them at the end when i do my final touches to the whole piece.

 

[bosoxlover12]

I used Topaz DeNoise to smooth down the grainy render, and put it at 50%. Thats all the effect I used on this pic. Its not even really an effect :/


I didnt use any High Pass, or Unsharp Mask, or anything that I usually do. There is a soft light layer on it, which might be the reason it looks that way, but no FX.

I took off the soft light layer

 

[Pugz]

it just looks over done here. probably just the other shit on it. its not bad though man

 

[Flight24]

I like V1 I just haaaaaate that box on the right. I like it overall though man it's good.

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

you had the layout right with the original, just needs different text.

none of the ones you have would really fit, maybe ill collab

 

[Falcons11497]

gimme psd of v2