Jay Cutler - Chicago Bears

[Digital_Viking]

 

[crush]

text and render are to fay away the lighting is to contrasted and the bg lacks try anchoring the text to an object mostly the render

 

[jarrod2323]

E, love the lighting.. the text effects are nice, too.

but, like Crush pointed out, the flow is hurt considerably by text placement. cutler's eyes are in an upward direction right to left. the text is left to right, which conflicts. you want a smoother transition