Gil Scott-Heron

[deeba]

8x10 Print for my wall. Re-design of his memoir cover "The Last Holiday"
Still a work in progress. figured I'd get some feedback/criticism
 
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[Pugz]

the top corners of the main picture seem a bit sharp considering the rest. but other than that this is awesome.

 

[youngguru]

cool, maybe try a displacement map instead of the wind? also possibly add a few blue accents to the top. the bottom right stock kind of throws off the flow a bit with the excessive brightness
 
 
looks good tho, i'm just nitpicking to give you something to think about lol

 

[jayvello]

looks good man, wouldnt know what to do to fix it