Fly As The Sky

[getyappcrnredy24]

http://getyappcrnredy24.deviantart.com/art...-wall-130240633
Made it while my cousin was playing COD, lol
Comments/Faves appreciated

 

[Oiler35]

Make the background picture less evident, and change the text.

Perty hot.

 

[.GR]

Eh. You can do better.

 

[Nucker]

Darken the Background. Add lighting & it's sick.

 

[yezzir]

i agree with the comments to make the background image less evident. that's sick though, i like it.

 

[Pugz]

Eh. You can do better.

Yep.
BG picture sticks out too much, render area is meh and wings look bad. Plus text and coloring isn't too good.


You can do lots better.

 

[Gtown81]

text is too bland, try using a different font and colour

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

yeah, I dissapointed with this one, especially myself
I rushed a lot of it and didn't really need to
next one shall be better, I hope

 

[JUNX]

Effects on the render is sick. Text is bad.