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[HTF]

V1

V2

CnC Please...

 

[J9]

not bad, subtext is terrible, need some lightig as well

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

Lighting is a biggie here, the first thing I noticed
main text is aight, but subtext has to go
maybe lose some red too?

 

[Pugz]

sub text us nasty as stated above, needs some render efx I think, also some sweet lighting.

 

[HTF]

Thanks for the feedback, added a V2.

 

[Pugz]

now it's montone :|